WALT: write a PTH blog comment
Here is the comment I wrote on Emilees blog post on the maori Dictionary
Hi Emilee im Dakota from NBC (New brighton Catholic school).
I really like how many words you have in your Maori Dictionary and how you put them in.
This is cool because schools need to teach different languages in schools.
Maybe Next time make the slide show smaller so its not coming of the page.:)
From,
Dakota
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Well done Dakota! This is positive- thoughtful- and helpful!
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work, I know Emily would appreciate your comment :)
Kia Ora Dakota, My name is Lexi from New Brighton Catholic school. I like how you were positive too Emilee and giving her some helpful feedback. Kai pai, Maybe next time you could explain more about what your doing :)
ReplyDeleteSincerely, Lexi!