Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 26 June 2020
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora Dakota,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Gabriella and I am from Hay Park School.
Something I like about your blog is that you add pictures in it so we under stand what you have created.
I think that next time you should write more about what you will be doing so we understand what you are telling us.
Also next time you should check your punctuation so that it make sense and that we understand it, either way you have done a great job.
From - Gabriella