W.A.L.T Write a persuasive text
Why All Children Should Have Pets.
I can not believe that people would think that kids are not allowed pets. They are good company, cuddly and can protect you.
Firstly, They are good company. Because if you are sad they can make you feel better. Then you will feel much happier.
Secondly, They are great with cuddly people and they are cuddly two. For example my cats are so cuddly and I love it.
Finally, They are really good to protect you. If you get burgled they will scare them away and they will never be seen again. I know because my next door neighbour has the same as this and tells them when someone is there.
In conclusion that grown-ups should allow them to have pets. Thank you for reading.
Thursday 6 August 2020
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Excellent work Dakota! It is particularly cool to see you using paragraphs in your writing, keep it up. You have some very strong reasons why children should have pets.
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