Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 13 May 2020
tai tayler is born
midde: they had a baby called tai tayler.
problem: teina's family did not like her being with capten tayler.
solution: they got everyone for a meal.
end:family meet baby and tai tayler forgot about everything
Dakota
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Morning Dakota, this looks like a summary of a story. Babies seem to have that effect on people don't they. It's hard to not be friendly when they are so cute. I like having meals with my family do you?
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