Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 22 April 2020
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Dakota
ReplyDeleteThis is a lovely Anzac poem, I like how you have put a title on your blog so the reader knows it is an excerpt of the poem. I really like how neat your writing is Dakota....great job!
Sarah
Excellent handwriting Dakota- You have been working very hard. I particularly like how clear this blog post is for the reader. Did you enjoy writing on paper? Would you like handwriting in the future?
ReplyDeleteWell done.